As the human to make money, does not care whom should hurt him, whom should be destroyed, we have to be more human consciousness and all living creatures. A scientist is helping to raise awareness and to protect the planet
Yamari go back and check your summary: As the human ____verb____ to make money, they don't care whom gets hurt or destroyed. we have to be (check this sentence) more human consciousness and all living creatures. A scientist is helping to raise awareness and to protect the planet. (This last sentence is okay.) Check what words are missing and the summary again.
The human is a very danger living creature. Don’t care about what happened to others living creatures. Now there is a scientific trying to raise the voice for the one’s can’t speak to let us now about it. How importance is take care our planet. And how danger is make money from the tree from the rain forest, and others places in the world.
Revision: Please check the corrections The human is a very dangerous living creature. He or she doesn't care about what happens to other living creatures. Now there is a scientist trying to raise awareness. He wants everyone to know about how important it is to take care our planet. How dangerous it is make money from the trees, the rain forest, and others places in the world.
According to what I could understand what is read there is a company dedicated to destroying the flora and fauna of a forest. But there is a scientific study that all this can cause damage to the environment. But there are also some students interested in the subject and try to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion this would be a problem for all that caring for the environment and that the there should concern us all because of this depends on our ecosystem. Until people do not realize the damage they do to our nature, how are you things will continue happening not only in our country but around the world.
Good work Maria. Review the text and post again. According to what I could understand from the reading, there is a company dedicated to destroying the flora and fauna of a forest. But there is a scientific study that all this can cause damage to the environment. But there are also some students interested in the subject and try (check verb tense) to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion, this would be a problem for all that caring for the environment and that the there should concern us all because of this depends on our ecosystem(check this sentence again. Until people do not(delete do not) realize the damage they do to our(delete our)nature, how are you (wrong pronoun) things will continue happening not only in our country but around the world.
According to what I understood from reading, is a company dedicated to the destruction of flora and fauna of a forest. But there are a scientist studying everything which can cause environmental damage. But there are some students interested in the subject and try to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion, this should be everyone's problem, because this depends on our ecosystem. Until the citizens realize the damage we do to our nature, these things continue to happen not only in our country but around the world
Revision: Please check the corrections Good According to what I understood from the reading, there is a company dedicated to the destruction of the flora and fauna of a forest. But there is a scientist studying everything about what can cause environmental damage. There are some students interested in the subject and are trying to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion, this should be everyone's problem, because this affects our ecosystems. Until the citizens realize the damage we are doing to nature, these things will continue to happen not only in our country but around the world.
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Save our planet
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As the human to make money, does not care whom should hurt him, whom should be destroyed, we have to be more human consciousness and all living creatures. A scientist is helping to raise awareness and to protect the planet
Yamari go back and check your summary:
DeleteAs the human ____verb____ to make money, they don't care whom gets hurt or destroyed. we have to be (check this sentence) more human consciousness and all living creatures.
A scientist is helping to raise awareness and to protect the planet. (This last sentence is okay.)
Check what words are missing and the summary again.
I don't remember my idea, I writtng a new one summary. Sorry
DeleteThe human is a very danger living creature. Don’t care about what happened to others living creatures. Now there is a scientific trying to raise the voice for the one’s can’t speak to let us now about it. How importance is take care our planet. And how danger is make money from the tree from the rain forest, and others places in the world.
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DeleteThe human is a very dangerous living creature. He or she doesn't care about what happens to other living creatures. Now there is a scientist trying to raise awareness. He wants everyone to know about how important it is to take care our planet. How dangerous it is make money from the trees, the rain forest, and others places in the world.
Save our planet
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According to what I could understand what is read there is a company dedicated to destroying the flora and fauna of a forest. But there is a scientific study that all this can cause damage to the environment. But there are also some students interested in the subject and try to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion this would be a problem for all that caring for the environment and that the there should concern us all because of this depends on our ecosystem. Until people do not realize the damage they do to our nature, how are you things will continue happening not only in our country but around the world.
Good work Maria.
DeleteReview the text and post again.
According to what I could understand from the reading, there is a company dedicated to destroying the flora and fauna of a forest. But there is a scientific study that all this can cause damage to the environment. But there are also some students interested in the subject and try (check verb tense) to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion, this would be a problem for all that caring for the environment and that the there should concern us all because of this depends on our ecosystem(check this sentence again. Until people do not(delete do not) realize the damage they do to our(delete our)nature, how are you (wrong pronoun) things will continue happening not only in our country but around the world.
According to what I understood from reading, is a company dedicated to the destruction of flora and fauna of a forest. But there are a scientist studying everything which can cause environmental damage. But there are some students interested in the subject and try to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion, this should be everyone's problem, because this depends on our ecosystem. Until the citizens realize the damage we do to our nature, these things continue to happen not only in our country but around the world
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According to what I understood from the reading, there is a company dedicated to the destruction of the flora and fauna of a forest. But there is a scientist studying everything about what can cause environmental damage. There are some students interested in the subject and are trying to help prevent this from happening. In my opinion, this should be everyone's problem, because this affects our ecosystems. Until the citizens realize the damage we are doing to nature, these things will continue to happen not only in our country but around the world.