Wednesday, September 19, 2012

Supporting details

Instructions:  Write three supporting details for the topic sentence.
Most politicians want to eliminate crime; however, it will take a great deal of money, time, and effort to
reach this goal.
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  3. _________________________________________________________
My parents were very strict; however, they had good reasons for all of their rules.
  1. _________________________________________________________
  2. _________________________________________________________
  3. _________________________________________________________

3 comments:

  1. Most politicians want to eliminate crime; however, it will take a great deal of money, time, and effort to
    reach this goal.

    1. The first thing politicians have to think and studied was is wrong with the economic in the island. Stop thinking we are living in Disney. Has to found a possibility to create job. Look the agriculture is no important anymore; work with the land, animals. Is that an option?

    2. When you create jobs your number of crime is going to come down. Crime is the one of the effect created, because people don’t have jobs. Is easy looking for money in drugs, and corruption?

    3. Politicians have to start thinking how to fix the problem. Are no taking about colors, we are talking about this country. Looking for answer no for more argument. Sit down, like in the other side just for a minute maybe you politicians can find some kind of ideas because the people have a lot of ideas. Maybe you can reach the goal.

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    1. My parents were very strict; however, they had good reasons for all of their rules

      1. When I was born my parents are so happy. But the time past and the cutie little baby is a trouble maker. She wants to, do what she wants at that moments their rules appears. No touch, no answer back, don’t throw that. She keeps growing and the rules become stricter.

      2. Now is spanking, punish. All that rules the parents created for good. In this world everybody have to follow rules, law. The parents try to show us follow rules since a little for when you are an adult don’t have problem.

      3. The reason can be millions. But the true is Love when you care for a person you give everything. The most important is showing responsibility, respectful, and be good person in be live. Rule is everything in live.

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  2. Good Supporting details.
    Now go back and check the verb tenses.

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