Write a dialogue about a hospital scene.
Use the listening exercise from English Discoveries as a guide.
The dialogue should have 3 or more characters. Each character should have at least 3 lines.
Dialogue Narrator: Alfredo and Nube went for a walk and Nube hurt his pawn. Nube get-up... Alfredo runs back to the house with nube in his arms. Someone please help me... Alfredo: Yamari call the vet Narrator: alba start screaming and crying. Alba: Oh noooo Nube Vet: Please calm down every body, Nube is going to be ok, after surgery. Alfredo: Surgery? Alba: Oh Noo! He is going to die! Yamari: Doctor tell me which is the procedure? Vet: Wait in the waiting room Yamari: Ok Narrator: Nube start barkling he is ok. Nube: baw waw and move his tail.
Narrator: The Vargas Family, Joe, Mary and Jovany are playing at Discovery Zone in Ponce. Jovany is happy, funny and mischievous child.
Jovany: Dad, look at this games! Joe: Ok, Jovany one wait moment before you play. Mary: Please be careful Jovy. Jovany: I want to run to the cube and and jump on top of it. Joe: No! Its dangerous. Mary: Dont do it!
Narrator: Jovany did not listen to mom and dad. He tried to jump on top of cube. Jovany fell on the floor. He was craying. Mary is nervous. She pick Jovany up.
Mary: Are you okay? Joe: Let me look at him. I want to check him. Jovany: Mom I have pain. Mary: Stay calm! You are going to be okay. Joe: Let's go to the hospital.
Very good! Text correction: Jovany: Dad, look at these games! Joe: Ok, Jovany wait one moment before you play. Jovany: I want to run to the cube and jump on top of it. Joe: No! It's dangerous. Narrator: Jovany did not listen to mom and dad. He tried to jump on top of the cube. Jovany fell on the floor. He was crying.
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Alfredo and Nube went for a walk and Nube hurt his pawn. Nube get-up...
Alfredo runs back to the house with nube in his arms. Someone please help me...
Alfredo: Yamari call the vet
Narrator: alba start screaming and crying.
Alba: Oh noooo Nube
Vet: Please calm down every body, Nube is going to be ok, after surgery.
Alfredo: Surgery?
Alba: Oh Noo! He is going to die!
Yamari: Doctor tell me which is the procedure?
Vet: Wait in the waiting room
Yamari: Ok
Narrator: Nube start barkling he is ok.
Nube: baw waw and move his tail.
I really enjoyed your hospital scene. Even Nube spoke!
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Narrator: The Vargas Family, Joe, Mary and Jovany are playing at Discovery Zone in Ponce. Jovany is happy, funny and mischievous child.
Jovany: Dad, look at this games!
Joe: Ok, Jovany one wait moment before you play.
Mary: Please be careful Jovy.
Jovany: I want to run to the cube and and jump on top of it.
Joe: No! Its dangerous.
Mary: Dont do it!
Narrator: Jovany did not listen to mom and dad. He tried to jump on top of cube. Jovany fell on the floor. He was craying.
Mary is nervous. She pick Jovany up.
Mary: Are you okay?
Joe: Let me look at him. I want to check him.
Jovany: Mom I have pain.
Mary: Stay calm! You are going to be okay.
Joe: Let's go to the hospital.
Very good!
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Jovany: Dad, look at these games!
Joe: Ok, Jovany wait one moment before you play.
Jovany: I want to run to the cube and jump on top of it.
Joe: No! It's dangerous.
Narrator: Jovany did not listen to mom and dad. He tried to jump on top of the cube. Jovany fell on the floor. He was crying.