After reading the story Write a Best Seller... on Your Cell Phone? on pages 28 and 29, begin your cell phone novel.
Use the characteristics of the cell phone novel (page 29) to create your text.
Today I was running to school, to the class, to the shop,and to the supermarket. I was looking for something. I didn't know. Why I was running like a crazy. I felt tired all ready. I needed to stop. Ahhhhhhh!!!
I stopped in the middle of nowhere. I started running. I have to be faster. I need to find out what is this about. Finally, I was at home. I was looking at man. What happend to me? I was looking around, everything was fine. Why did feel like this? Time passed so quickly.
I remembered the last thing I did along time ago. I felt asleep. Before I stared running. Oh noooo! Someone was kipnapping me in my dream. I needed to find out how to get out.
I jumped out oh, oh, oh, oh.... I started screaming. My husband said: "Why are you Screaming like that?" I was so glad to see him, It was just a dream.
A lot of action. Very Good Maria. Text revision: Two men arrive and take him by surprise. They hit him on the head and mouth with a gun. They try to bring away his gun.
Michael will be on duty from 11 pm to 7 am. When his departure time is approaching, he is about to give a last preventive round in the supermarket he is watching. Two men arrive and take him by surprise. They hit him on the head and mouth with a gun. They try to bring away his gun. Michael confronts them with but no luck; the thieves take away his gun. He struggles with the two assailants and manages to knock one of them down. Michael runs, then to his car and leaves the place. He is seriously hurt. He goes to police headquarters and reports what has happened. The officers give him first aid while the ambulance arrives and he is taken to the hospital. As this occurs, the police go to the supermarket and discover that the guard who was going to relieve Michael is dead on the pavement. The assailants took money, goods and Michael’s gun. They also used the gun to kill his partner.
Michael will be on duty from 11 pm to 7 am. When his departure time is approaching, he is about to give a last preventive round in the supermarket he is watching. Two men arrive and take him by surprise. They hit him on the head and mouth with a gun. They try to bring away his gun. Michael confronts them with but no luck; the thieves take away his gun. He struggles with the two assailants and manages to knock one of them down. Michael runs, then to his car and leaves the place. He is seriously hurt. He goes to police headquarters and reports what has happened. The officers give him first aid while the ambulance arrives and he is taken to the hospital. As this occurs, the police go to the supermarket and discover that the guard who was going to relieve Michael is dead on the pavement. The assailants took money, goods and Michael’s gun. They also used the gun to kill his partner. Michael is out of the hospital and he is recovering. He found out that his friend was murdered that night. Michael feels bad about his friend. He was lucky that night.
She is the daughter of Bella Margot most famous lawyer in town. She is a beautiful girl, simple, and rich. Bella lives madly in love with Caleb, a young worker, beautiful, strong and gardener of the mansion. Both 15 years old. One day she can not stand but the urge and decided to tell the truth. Finally told him and he responded "I also from the first day I saw you I have lived in love." Since then began a relationship with the prestigious hidden father. Each passing day the love grew more and more. Until the day I get less than expected, the day of truth, his father found out and everything changed. She was sent to another country away from his true love. For five years, Caleb did not look up until the dawn, recovered, married, had a girl Hermos. After two years of meeting Margot Bella returns home with her daughter and husband to let her father know that true love is never forgotten.
Bella is the daughter of Bella Margot the most famous lawyer in town. She is a beautiful girl, simple, and rich. Bella lives madly in love with Caleb, a beautiful and strong young man. He is the gardener of the mansion. These two are only 15 years old. One day, she can no longer stand the urge and decides to tell Caleb the truth. When she finally tells him, he responds: "I also have felt the same way from the first day I saw you. I have lived in love." Since then began a relationship with the prestigious hidden father.
Each passing day the love grew more and more. Until the day I get less than expected, the day of truth, his father found out and everything changed. She was sent to another country away from his true love. For five years, Caleb did not look up until the dawn, recovered, married, had a girl Hermos. After two years of meeting Margot Bella returns home with her daughter and husband to let her father know that true love is never forgotten.
Bellamargot She is the daughter of licensed Frontera, the most famous people. He is a very powerful and respected by all. Bella is beautiful, simple and rich. She lives madly in love with Caleb, a young worker, beautiful, strong and gardener of the mansion of the licensee. Both are 15 years of age. One day she could stand it no more desire and decided to tell the truth to Caleb. Finally he said and he replied "I also from the first day I saw you, I have lived in love with you." Since then began a relationship in secret, that his father never found out, because they knew that if that happened he would not accept that his beautiful daughter was with the poor home gardener. Each passing day love grows more and more. One day it happened at least expected her father became aware of the relationship of his daughter to the home gardener, the face to both an explanation and without allowing Caleb agolpeo leaving it on the floor unconscious. A Bella shipping to another country, far from her true love. For five years, Caleb looking until dawn, the recovered, married her and had a beautiful girl. After two years Bellamargot returns home with her daughter and husband to show his father that true love is never forgotten. She taught his father to love no matter the economic society. "When you love you love" Returning his father had no choice but to accept.
What a love story! Text revision: Bella Margot is the daughter of Frontera, the most prestigious lawyer in town. Frontera is a very powerful and respected by all. Bella is beautiful, simple and rich. She lives madly in love with Caleb, a beautiful, strong, young worker. He is the gardener of the Frontera's mansion. These two are both 15 years old. One day, Bella could stand it no longer the desire and decided to tell Caleb the truth. When she told him how she felt he said: "I also feel the same way from the first day I saw you. I have lived in love with you." They began their relationship in secret. Bella's father could never find out, because they knew he would never accept that his beautiful daughter was with the poor home gardener. Each passing day, their love grew more and more. One day, what they least expected happened, Frontera became aware of the relationship between his daughter and the home gardener. He confronted them face to face. Without allowing Caleb to explain he hit the gardener leaving him unconscious on the floor. He shipped Bella to another country, far from her true love. For five years, Caleb looked for his love, he found her at her aunt's house. He remembered she had spoken about her aunt. The two lovers married and had a beautiful baby girl. After two years Bella Margot returned home with her daughter and husband to show her father that true love is never forgotten. She taught her father to love no matter the economic situation. "When you love you love" Her father had no choice but to accept his daughter decision.
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Today I was running to school, to the class, to the shop,and to the supermarket. I was looking for something. I didn't know. Why I was running like a crazy. I felt tired all ready. I needed to stop. Ahhhhhhh!!!
I stopped in the middle of nowhere. I started running. I have to be faster. I need to find out what is this about. Finally, I was at home. I was looking at man. What happend to me? I was looking around, everything was fine. Why did feel like this? Time passed so quickly.
I remembered the last thing I did along time ago. I felt asleep. Before I stared running. Oh noooo! Someone was kipnapping me in my dream. I needed to find out how to get out.
I jumped out oh, oh, oh, oh....
I started screaming. My husband said: "Why are you Screaming like that?"
I was so glad to see him, It was just a dream.
Cool!!!
DeleteI would like to know about sleep.
I suggest you specify a little more of that run so fast.
DeleteIt was a great story and was funny.
DeleteYou should say where the man was when he was trying to kidnap you.
I wrote something new in the interaction novels Thanks for the comments
DeleteAction packed cell phone novel!
ReplyDeleteVery Good!
Text revision:
already
Why did I feel like this?
I fell asleep.
Before I started running.
A lot of action. Very Good Maria.
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Two men arrive and take him by surprise. They hit him on the head and mouth with a gun. They try to bring away his gun.
Michael will be on duty from 11 pm to 7 am. When his departure time is approaching, he is about to give a last preventive round in the supermarket he is watching. Two men arrive and take him by surprise. They hit him on the head and mouth with a gun. They try to bring away his gun. Michael confronts them with but no luck; the thieves take away his gun. He struggles with the two assailants and manages to knock one of them down. Michael runs, then to his car and leaves the place. He is seriously hurt. He goes to police headquarters and reports what has happened. The officers give him first aid while the ambulance arrives and he is taken to the hospital. As this occurs, the police go to the supermarket and discover that the guard who was going to relieve Michael is dead on the pavement. The assailants took money, goods and Michael’s gun. They also used the gun to kill his partner.
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DeleteMichael will be on duty from 11 pm to 7 am. When his departure time is approaching, he is about to give a last preventive round in the supermarket he is watching. Two men arrive and take him by surprise. They hit him on the head and mouth with a gun. They try to bring away his gun. Michael confronts them with but no luck; the thieves take away his gun. He struggles with the two assailants and manages to knock one of them down. Michael runs, then to his car and leaves the place. He is seriously hurt. He goes to police headquarters and reports what has happened. The officers give him first aid while the ambulance arrives and he is taken to the hospital. As this occurs, the police go to the supermarket and discover that the guard who was going to relieve Michael is dead on the pavement. The assailants took money, goods and Michael’s gun. They also used the gun to kill his partner. Michael is out of the hospital and he is recovering. He found out that his friend was murdered that night. Michael feels bad about his friend. He was lucky that night.
DeleteWonderful!
DeleteSad history
DeleteI suggest that you add this to the end.
Michael very sad visit to the cemetery mate and says "Dude you are not physically today with us, but remember your soul and will always be here."
From text to Hollywood!
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True love
She is the daughter of Bella Margot most famous lawyer in town. She is a beautiful girl, simple, and rich. Bella lives madly in love with Caleb, a young worker, beautiful, strong and gardener of the mansion. Both 15 years old. One day she can not stand but the urge and decided to tell the truth. Finally told him and he responded "I also from the first day I saw you I have lived in love." Since then began a relationship with the prestigious hidden father. Each passing day the love grew more and more. Until the day I get less than expected, the day of truth, his father found out and everything changed. She was sent to another country away from his true love. For five years, Caleb did not look up until the dawn, recovered, married, had a girl Hermos. After two years of meeting Margot Bella returns home with her daughter and husband to let her father know that true love is never forgotten.
Bella is the daughter of Bella Margot the most famous lawyer in town. She is a beautiful girl, simple, and rich. Bella lives madly in love with Caleb, a beautiful and strong young man. He is the gardener of the mansion. These two are only 15 years old. One day, she can no longer stand the urge and decides to tell Caleb the truth. When she finally tells him, he responds: "I also have felt the same way from the first day I saw you. I have lived in love."
ReplyDeleteSince then began a relationship with the prestigious hidden father.
Each passing day the love grew more and more. Until the day I get less than expected, the day of truth, his father found out and everything changed. She was sent to another country away from his true love. For five years, Caleb did not look up until the dawn, recovered, married, had a girl Hermos. After two years of meeting Margot Bella returns home with her daughter and husband to let her father know that true love is never forgotten.
True Love
ReplyDeleteBellamargot She is the daughter of licensed Frontera, the most famous people. He is a very powerful and respected by all. Bella is beautiful, simple and rich. She lives madly in love with Caleb, a young worker, beautiful, strong and gardener of the mansion of the licensee. Both are 15 years of age. One day she could stand it no more desire and decided to tell the truth to Caleb. Finally he said and he replied "I also from the first day I saw you, I have lived in love with you." Since then began a relationship in secret, that his father never found out, because they knew that if that happened he would not accept that his beautiful daughter was with the poor home gardener. Each passing day love grows more and more. One day it happened at least expected her father became aware of the relationship of his daughter to the home gardener, the face to both an explanation and without allowing Caleb agolpeo leaving it on the floor unconscious. A Bella shipping to another country, far from her true love. For five years, Caleb looking until dawn, the recovered, married her and had a beautiful girl. After two years Bellamargot returns home with her daughter and husband to show his father that true love is never forgotten. She taught his father to love no matter the economic society. "When you love you love" Returning his father had no choice but to accept.
What a love story!
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Bella Margot is the daughter of Frontera, the most prestigious lawyer in town. Frontera is a very powerful and respected by all. Bella is beautiful, simple and rich. She lives madly in love with Caleb, a beautiful, strong, young worker. He is the gardener of the Frontera's mansion. These two are both 15 years old. One day, Bella could stand it no longer the desire and decided to tell Caleb the truth. When she told him how she felt he said: "I also feel the same way from the first day I saw you. I have lived in love with you."
They began their relationship in secret. Bella's father could never find out, because they knew he would never accept that his beautiful daughter was with the poor home gardener. Each passing day, their love grew more and more. One day, what they least expected happened, Frontera became aware of the relationship between his daughter and the home gardener. He confronted them face to face. Without allowing Caleb to explain he hit the gardener leaving him unconscious on the floor. He shipped Bella to another country, far from her true love.
For five years, Caleb looked for his love, he found her at her aunt's house. He remembered she had spoken about her aunt. The two lovers married and had a beautiful baby girl. After two years Bella Margot returned home with her daughter and husband to show her father that true love is never forgotten. She taught her father to love no matter the economic situation. "When you love you love" Her father had no choice but to accept his daughter decision.
romance history!!!!
ReplyDeleteI believe you are in love...
ReplyDeleteAnything similar to Shaymil's life is only a coincidence.
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