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Thursday, August 2, 2012
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The story of a security guard
ReplyDeleteMichael will get to do the tour of duty from 11 pm to 7 am. When is approaching departure time is about to give the preventive round the supermarket is watching, two men arrive and take him by surprise give head and mouth with the gun and try to bring away his gun regulation. Michael confronts them but no luck; the thieves take away his gun regulation. The struggles with the two assailants and manages to knock one of them. Runs and rides in his car and leaves the place, it will seriously hurt the headquarters of the police and report what happened. The guards at the barracks give first aid while the ambulance arrives and is taken to the hospital. As this occurs, the guards go to the place where the events occurred before and realize that the guard was going to relieve Michael was dead on the pavement and the assailants took money, goods and Michael gun regulation, with which killed his partner.
Maria please post the revised text at "Your Cell Phone Novel"
DeleteI suggest this Title: Security Guard
ReplyDeleteThe police chase the assailant and caught and found everything they still and found the cars they used are stilled and the guys are son of the important person.
Good twist to the story.
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The police chase the assailants and catch them. They find everything the assailants stole and they discover the car that was used for the robbery is stolen. The assailants are sons of an important person.
For Shaymil
ReplyDeleteI suggest this tittle: Poor & Rich Love
I fight for her. Like make me a very Important person. Study and make my own Gardening Love Company. And show to her father I canhave her like a queen.
My Cell Phone Novel
ReplyDeleteSomething you never forget
By Yamari
Today I was running to school, to the class, to the shop and to the supermarket. I was looking for something. I didn't know. Why I was running like a crazy. I felt tired all ready. I needed to stop. Ahhhhhhh!!! I stopped in the middle of nowhere. I started running. I have to be faster. I need to find out what is this about. Finally, I was at home. I was looking at that man. I know him but I can remember who is he. What happened to me? I was looking around, everything was fine. Is like nothing happened. Why did feel like this? Time passed so quickly. I remember that man I saw him in pictures. He is a danger person. He takes people to another time. I remembered the last thing I did along time ago. I felt asleep. Before I stared running. Oh nooo! Someone was kidnapping me in my dream. I needed to find out how to get out. I jumped out oh, oh, oh, oh.... I started screaming. My husband said: Woman you in same is midnight "Why are you Screaming like that?" I was so glad to see him, it was just a dream
Yamari could you please call me. I need to speak to you today.
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